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 Grammatically Challenged Story - Part 2

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JP Flores
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PostSubject: Grammatically Challenged Story - Part 2   Grammatically Challenged Story - Part 2 Icon_minitimeMon Sep 03, 2007 8:39 pm

I thought Jay's ex-girlfriend was really out of our
lives. But heaven
only goes that I was wrong. Kakakasal pa lang namin
nun when Jay
received a uninamous text. "Meet me at the clinic." I
had a stinking
feeling in my butt. I told him not to go. It might in
danger him. Pero
sabi niya, ok lang daw because life is what we make.
Tumahimik lang
ako. Sabi niya, "Penny for you talks." But I didn't
know what to say.
Beggars can't be losers. Isa pa, worried talaga ako na
baka yung girl
yun. Jay said, "Can't got your tongue?" I tried to
smile at him. Kahit
di ako nagsalita, actions speak louder than works, di
ba?

Be that as is may, umalis pa rin siya. I was out of
the loophole.
After a few hours, I called him on his cellphone. But
my calls fell on
Jeff's ears. Lalo akong nag-worry kasi I didn't even
know Jeff. Sabi
na nga ba di na dapat umalis si Jay. That's what I'm
talking about it.

So I tried calling some friends who will help me find
Jay. That's what
friends are for naman di ba? But I just faced a blank
mall. I had to
do this alone. Nag-taxi na lang ako. Pero ang mahal na
pala ng plug
down rate.

When I got to the clinic, the security was really
buffed up. Di
basta-basta makakapasok. So I said, "I beg your
cordon. I'm patient.
It's my favorite virtue nga e." Nagduda yata yung
isang guard.
Hinawakan ako sa arm. The nerd! I shouted, "Don't
touch me not!" Buti
na lang the other guards were nice and said, "Come on,
let's join us."

When I went inside, parang I've been there, done
there. Nung walang
nakatingin, nag-explore ako. Nakarating ako sa top
floor and I had a
bird's IQ of the clinic. I could not explain it but I
was drawn to a
room on the floor. Siguro Divine Intermission na yun.

Parang may narinig akong umuungol. I was thorn. Di ko
alam kung aalis
ba ako o papasukin ko. It made me stick in the stomach
to think that
Jay and his ex-girlfriend were there. I tried to tell
myself to slower
my expectations. But to tell with it! I had to strike
while the iron
is not. I had to hear the truth from the corpse's
mouth. I barraged
in. O my gas! Si Jay, naka-strap sa operating table,
parang genie pig
sa isang nakakatakot na experiment. He was on the
cutting edge. He was
bleeding. At ang doctor na nagpapahirap sa kanya, ang
ex-girlfriend
niya at ang bago nitong boyfriend, ang nurse na si
Walter. Doon ko
napatunayang blood is thicker than Walter.

Guess watch? Di ko alam kung paano ko nagawa pero I
was able to search
and rescue Jay. Siguro adrenaline brush na yun.

Now, he's recovering. Nag-sorry siya na hindi siya
nakinig sa akin. I
know it's a better pill to swallow your fried so it's
forgive and
forget me not. All swell that end swell. I know we
should kiss and put
on makeup.

Ang ex-girlfriend naman niya at si Walter, nakakulong
na. Detention is
really better than cure. So the moral of the lesson
is: if symptoms
persist, insult your doctor.
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HAHAHA lol!
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